Depending on the translator, the english version of the incantation does vary, slightly, but, another would be.. "Oh ruler, mask of flesh and blood, all creations of the universe, fluttering of the wings, ye who bears the name of man! Truth and temperance, strike but slightly your claw upon this wall which feigns ignorance of sin!" The only really significant difference between the current one and this, is the last part, "strike but slightly your claw upon this wall which feigns ignorance of sin!" Just a suggestion, because "upon this sinless wall of dreams" sounds a little silly. I apologize in advance if my suggestion is offensive, in the sense of questioning your current one.
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