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 Post subject: Report typos or "graphic issues" here
PostPosted: March 21st, 2005, 11:45 am 
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If you found a typo or noticed that something does not look right (not aligning, matching up, colors wrong, etc) then post it here, not on the gboards. We are not very concerned with these types of things during alpha.

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 Post subject: Studying
PostPosted: March 23rd, 2005, 3:28 pm 
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Heyas, I don't know if this is a typo, but it just don't sound right. When I study, is says something like- Sato opens up a The Art of War, and slow begins to read it. Shouldn't it be slowly instead of slow? I know it's not important, but it just annoys me.

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PostPosted: March 24th, 2005, 10:47 pm 
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Kenjii wrote:
You are using:
<used as light> <0> (Lit) a torch
<worn on body> <+++++++++ > a laen tunic
<worn on body> <++++++++++> a midnight black gi
<worn on body> <++++++++++> a sea-blue undershirt
<worn on body> <+ > some leather armor
<worn on body> <++++++++++> A Police Shirt
<worn on body> <++++++++++> A Leather Chestplate
<worn on head> <+++++ > A Black Helmet
<worn on legs> <+++++ > a pair of laen greaves
<worn on hands> <+++++++ > a pair of laen gauntlets
<worn as shield> <++++++ > a gleaming shield
<worn about body> <++++++++ > A Silken Kimono
<wielded> <+++++++ > (Glowing) (Humming) Demon Slayer Dagger
<worn on eyes> <+ > An Eye Patch
<worn over face> <++++++++++> Demon's Mask
<worn around ankle> <++++++++++> Golden Anklet
<worn around ankle> <++++++++++> Golden Anklet

Not really aligned.


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PostPosted: March 24th, 2005, 11:21 pm 
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What isn't? Each has a different length of characters. It shouldn't be aligned.

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PostPosted: March 25th, 2005, 1:36 pm 
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I really think it should be aligned so I can easily compare it with my other equipment.
Kenjii wrote:
You stare into their body...

Shouldn't it be "You stare into his/her body..."?


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PostPosted: March 25th, 2005, 4:55 pm 
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The eq thing, it's not really possible. First of all, each item has different amount of characters, and each item has a different AC, so the AC bar isn't always the same. Sure I could fix up eq slots, but that would look ugly.
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<worn on head      >


I suppose. Their works too.

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PostPosted: March 25th, 2005, 8:23 pm 
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... No reply to my post?

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PostPosted: March 25th, 2005, 11:15 pm 
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Not gonna reply to every post. If I don't, that means it'll be fixed sometime.

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PostPosted: March 26th, 2005, 9:42 pm 
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Oh, ok, thanks.

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PostPosted: March 29th, 2005, 2:29 am 
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room name typo:
"A small patch of tree's" (should be "trees")

object name typo:
"A pair of evisu-brand kakis lie on the ground." (should be "khakis")

room description typo (Before a cave dwelling):
"The cave to the north is one of adverage size..." (should be "average")

(Wait, how big is an average-sized cave? That makes no sense!)

room description typo:
"A large isle through the mall" (should be "aisle") (better yet, make it wide instead of large)

object description typo:
"A joing of cocaine lies here." (should be "joint")

object description typo:
Elevator: "A pannel is embeded in the wall with many buttons upon it" (should be "...panel is embedded...")

Juuban Gardens Elevator: must type "push nineth" to get to the ninth floor. (should be "push ninth")

Since elevator buttons IRL are labeled '1', '2', etc., perhaps the command should be "push 1", "push 2", etc.

"The fire starts, and you stand back up, fininshed making the fire." (should be "finished")

event typo:
"You drink cola from a mug of hot cocoa." (cola != cocoa)

object name typo:
"an Aquarias pendant" (should be "Aquarius")
(may just be a typo in the 'list' command in Pendants R' Us)

object name superfluous words:
"A citizen walks strolls along the sidewalk." (walks strolls?)

"The jack pot for this arena is * Yen" (should be "jackpot")

'A spa therapist says 'There that should take care your'" (incomplete thought)

"* opens up a copy of InuYasha Volume 1 and slow flip through it." (should be "...slowly flips...")

At the bottom of the output of the "gboard" command is the message:
"You current board is *." (should be "Your")


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PostPosted: March 29th, 2005, 3:28 am 
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The header in the 'group' command has alignment problems.

The columns of the 'practice' command do not wrap nicely at 80 columns. Yes, players can adjust their clients to compensate, but then room descriptions will get harder to read. I think everything should at least look good in the default 80 column width. AFAIK this is the only command that doesn't.

Object name typo:
"A large pear shaped piece of clay lies here." (missing a hyphen between "pear" and "shaped")


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PostPosted: April 1st, 2005, 12:09 pm 
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There is an incomplete sentence in the output of the "cscore" command:

"You need * CP to the next class level."

I think this should be:

"You need * CP to advance to the next class level."


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PostPosted: April 1st, 2005, 8:28 pm 
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"Roleplay: Arena: * challenges * to a dual against *" (should be "duel")


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PostPosted: April 1st, 2005, 9:31 pm 
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That last one was a Roleplay. That means a player typed in as RP, aka it wasn't a real arena challenge

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PostPosted: April 12th, 2005, 9:21 pm 
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I found a few more typos...I would post more, but I'm getting tired.


EVENT TYPOS


"You have have reached level *!" ("have" is repeated. Nobody noticed this?)

"You overcook a a roasted chunk chunks brain brains." Mmmm.

"You have been saved in preperation for a new change." should be "...preparation..."

"* prys a Shikon Shard out of their neck." should be "...pries..."

"* makes loud wretching noises and pukes on the ground." should be "...retching..."

"A traveler looks up at you, smiling and says, "Oh thank goodness
you're here... I was climbing and I spranged my ankle... " should be "...sprained...". While you're at it, add a comma after "smiling", "Oh"

You have been KILLED!!
"realise" should be "realize"
"Luckly" should be "Luckily" or "Fortunately"

"You sit down and unwravel the cloth from around your feet and ankles." should be "...unravel..."

(inside A small, wooden home)
"A merchant says 'that may be usefull to you, and you alone.'" should be "...useful..."


OBJECT NAME TYPOS


"a rolex brand watch" should be "...Rolex-brand..."

"a niko-brand highheel shoe" should be "...high-heel..."

"Scalemail" should be "scale mail"

"A Leather Chestplate" should be "...Chest Plate"

"A strong cloth lies here on the ground, wraveled up." should be "...raveled..."

"A female villager sits on a sraw mat, sipping her tea." should be "...straw..."

"A boar snorts at the ground, grunting noisely." should be "...noisily."

"Wooden Sandles" should be "...Sandals"

"* hairdye" should be "* hair dye"


ROOM DESCRIPTION TYPOS


Along the beginning village path
"inaccessable" should be "inaccesible"

A forest split-path
"foward" should be "forward"

Farther into the forest
"abstructing" should be "obstructing"
"thier" should be "their"

Before the large forest
"abscent" should be "absent"
"the the" should be "the"

A Rickety Bridge
"unsturdy" is not a word, should probably be "unsteady"
"infact" should be "in fact"

A dusty path through the village
"mainstreeth" should be "main street", I presume

Before the mountain
"laborously" should be "laboriously"
(also, "has laboriously been made" may be less awkward than "has been laboriously made")

A bend in the trail
"unpassable" should be "impassable"

A flat path
"continously" should be "continuously"

A shaded path
"comforatbly" should be "comfortably"

A rocky mountain trail
"saftey" should be "safety"
"barricated" should be "barricaded"

A trail through the Forest
"barracded" should be "barricaded"

Deep in the Forest
"baracading" should be "barracading"

Above a dark tunnel
"downards" should be "downwards"

A small, wooden home
"dwwell" should be "dwell"

A dripping, cool cavern
"becomming" should be "becoming"

A trail through the forest
"hooveprints" should be "hoofprints"
"eachother" should be "each other"

A Waterfall
"poors" should be "pours"

The Back of the Waterfall
"infront" should be "in front"

Deep in the Forest
"emminating" should be "emanating"

The Demon Brooding Grounds
"occured" should be "occurred"

A Trail Around the Lake
"youkais" should be "youkai"

At the start of a long worn path
"distuingishable" should be "distinguishable"

A curve in the path
"neverending" should be "never-ending"

A small trail
"traveld" should be "travelled"

A small trail
"stong" should be "strong"

A small trail
"wild life" should be "wildlife"
"withing" should be "within"

A Dense Forest
"backround" should be "background"
"wathched" should be "watched"

An open field
"fench" should be "finch"

The Bone Eaters Well
"makeout" should be "make out" or "discern"

The Higurashi Courtyard
"writting" should be "writing"

The Higurashi Courtyard
"fense" should be "fence"

Upon a staircase
"steping" should be "stepping"

Climbing the stairs
"shirne" should be "shrine"

A street leading to the North Gate
"torists" should be "tourists"

The Lake
"noticable" should be "noticeable"

The Lake
"burts" should be "bursts"

A Dense Forest
"sharping" should be "sharpening"


ROOM NAME TYPOS


"The Bone Eaters Well" should be "The Bone-Eater's Well" (add hyphen and apostrophe)


HELP FILE TYPOS


help pushup
"truely" should be "truly"

help gnote
"correspondance" should be "correspondence"
"Arguements" should be "Arguments"

help guilds
"requre" should be "require"

help rules
"Changable" should be "Changeable"

help setform
"constuition" should be "constitution"

help translations
"Japaneses" should be "Japanese"

help shard
"dispite" should be "despite"
"realised" should be "realized"
"thrusted" should be "thrust"
"volitile" should be "volatile"

help align
"antigood", "antievil", and "antineutral" are not words. Use "anti-good", "anti-evil", and "anti-neutral" instead.


OBJECT DESCRIPTION TYPOS


(sign in A small trail)
"fabeled" should be "fabled"


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