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| Author: | Kitsuko [ July 6th, 2005, 10:57 am ] |
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Reeve wrote: Okay, so finding typos is a hobby? Not a hobby. They jump out at me and bug me. But there is a certain satisfaction in submitting a spammy post to document them. |
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| Author: | Teepo [ September 18th, 2005, 11:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Typo's |
Room typo's: Between Apartments: the comma after rugs and floors should probably be a semicolon. Also painting should be painted. Also, it says west for one direction, and right for the other. A players right is not always to the east. That's between every single apartment too. The Elevator (All floors): It says spacey, and should be spacious. well lighted should have a - between well and lighted. One should be On. A classical music should just be Classical music. Juuban Gardens Reception Desk: Comming should be coming. The Juuban Gardens: Apartement should be apartment. Main Street (South of the police station): Garaje should be garage. Main Street (Between the weaponshop and armorshop): modeled after from the fuedal era...from is not necessary. Main Street (South of the clinic): Ambulence should be ambulance. Purgatory: No where should be nowhere. |
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| Author: | komeguro [ February 1st, 2006, 5:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | typo |
I found this heading twoard the wolf deamon training area the typo ishabe and the sentence its in dosnt make that much since along a path Remains of trees are seen onthe ground, due to the fact that this part of the area was recently made as an alternate path for quicker escapes fo the wolf demons. this whole area seems to HABE been used to be part of the woods that are northwest of here. exits:north east south west there u go |
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| Author: | UNKNOWN [ February 5th, 2006, 2:24 am ] |
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A dics labeled 'The Game' lies on the ground here.. (2) |
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| Author: | Arrozar [ July 28th, 2006, 10:51 am ] |
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minor typo in resistive stance helpfile "This stance emphasizes on deflecting blows from an enemy. They will do less damage, BUT SO YOU WILL." |
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| Author: | Lumine [ October 11th, 2006, 9:27 am ] |
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Years late, years upon years late, but to correct realise to realize is insanely stupid. "Yes, please forget the fact that only Americans use zeds in words like that, we must make the entire world do it as well." Either is correct, I prefer the s.  There are a few weird issues with commas in words, though. Like "eye's" instead of 'eyes'. Not a big deal. And I'm tired, forgiveness. Grammar nazi'ing on this little sleep isn't good for me. :\ |
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| Author: | RLB [ October 17th, 2006, 11:08 am ] |
| Post subject: | Tourists |
A street leading to the North Gate The road is partially crowded by cars, the sidewalks with people. The crowd is made up of a blend of citizens and visitors, as Wutainimi City is a popular place for torists. Exits: north south. TORISTS? |
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| Author: | Conner [ October 17th, 2006, 6:56 pm ] |
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Hehehe.. just in case, it's always a good idea to provide the correct spelling too, I would imagine that should read tourists. 
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| Author: | Hyuga [ December 4th, 2006, 7:14 pm ] |
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TYPO: Juuban Gardens The elevator references a "pannel" when it should have a "panel". |
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| Author: | Hyuga [ December 5th, 2006, 11:28 am ] |
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TYPO: Pendants R Us [ 839] an Aquarias pendant. Should be Aquarius. |
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| Author: | Kagomaru [ January 25th, 2007, 10:32 am ] |
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'Reeve 'Denkiteki Akumu'.' He is a male Human (error) Slayer, 486 years of age. He has been logged in for 6 hours, 11 minutes, and 43 seconds. He is a player. Reeve's personal bio: Denkiteki Akumu (Legendary Nightmare) Human (error)-Shouldn't we be able to repick a sub-race or something when we switch to humans?Or just have the old one appear there.Anyway,just wanted to point that out! |
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| Author: | Hakuri [ February 21st, 2007, 1:28 am ] |
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In the future east of the first shop cluster. <Health:[523/523] Jakai:[258] Stamina:[444]> Librarian May says to you 'While this process takes place, you will be Busy. Attempting to concentrate enough to understand the book. Any movement you make may disrupt this cicle, so be sure to focus.' If you are human and therefore tend to not realize typos slowly check the last line. EDIT: Before Sakuragawa's gym entrance At the entrance of Sakuragawa's gym, two large palm trees stand tall against each corner of the desk which the receptionist sits behind, attending costumers. Posters, signs, and all sort of ads are posted against the wall. A pile of magazines also sit on a small table, for costumers, or people waiting have something to keep themselves entertained. Exits: east [southwest]. EDIT2: help weapon No help on 'weapon' found. Suggested Help Files: wear leap weapon attacks weapons weapons should also work. EDIT3:Same with slayers. EDIT4:Dead message Comp didn't copy the part right though. EDIT 5: " To enter the subway, type "geton subway" " " Mary, the Librarian whispers to you 'here. I'll help you comprehend what you can't to my fullest.' " vv Letters in Shin library are spaced out vv " The electronically powered door slides open... " |
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| Author: | Hakuri [ March 18th, 2007, 6:50 pm ] |
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You get Lion plushie from the corpse of A young boy Hakuri squeezes Lion plushie as they lift it. Lion plushie lets out a recorded *!ROAR!*. Should be 'you' 'as you' in the second line. ------------------- The Hanyou help file should mention that not all Half-demons appear human, just the lucky ones. ____________-----____ I just realized that this might be a bug... When my 'broad sheath' is damaged I try to have it reapired, I'm told that Mr. Fixit can't/won't and then it's fixed. |
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| Author: | Lilian [ March 21st, 2007, 2:21 am ] |
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Escalator Up Exits: north. You are too exhausted. That can't be right. |
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| Author: | Hakuri [ March 21st, 2007, 6:54 pm ] |
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A small, wooden home Though small, it seems that this home could easily fit a family of four comfortably. The single room is well kept, and the home itself appears to be in good condition. Exits: east. A torch lies here A female villager sits on a sraw mat, sipping her tea. __________________________________________________ <Health:[2,476/4,010] Jakai:[1,723] Stamina:[3,372]> sheath kotetsu sheath You cannot fit more than 2 weapon(s) in A BroadSheath! <Health:[2,476/4,010] Jakai:[1,723] Stamina:[3,372]> exam sheath You see nothing special. When you look inside, you see: A BroadSheath holds: (Shining) An old-looking katana __________________________________________________ <Health:[4,010/4,010] Jakai:[1,723] Stamina:[3,393]> who Army of forsaken That's not a class, race, order, guild, council or deity. <Health:[4,010/4,010] Jakai:[1,723] Stamina:[3,393]> who Sacred Knights That's not a class, race, order, guild, council or deity. But both are clans. __________________________________________________ Aproaching a bridge Approching, and you are walking away from it sometimes. _________________________________________________ Haira to FF Before the large forest The trees seems to be _________________________________________________ An avarage wolf BoP _________________________________________________ <Health:[] Jakai:[] Stamina:[]> wield axe You dual-wield a short axe. <Health:[] Jakai:[] Stamina:[]> chop You are not wielding an item that chops. <Health:[] Jakai:[] Stamina:[]> remove katana You stop using A fine katana. <Health:[] Jakai:[] Stamina:[]> chop You take a short axe, and begin to chop a tree. ________________________________________________ I saw the sun rise echos (both) and I'm still human. Come to think of it, when I went Human I didn't see any night echos... o.O?? _______________________________________________- <Health:[3,641/4,019] Jakai:[1,723] Stamina:[3,413]> That's gonna leave a mark. ((What will?))) -------------------------------------------------------------- A chicken-head-shaped mass of fried food Weird thing when someone else eats it. |
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